Ayushman_Yadav

so far it's a very good novel The character introduction is good andd th MC character is good world building is nice just give it a try

nice 👍

it started out well and became great but at god and Demigod's war it goes down hill after that war author is just milking story with some side stories with no main plot The same thing happened to the supreme magus author they can't let go of their masterpiece at their best they keep stretching the plot for unnecessary things

it started out well and became great but at god and Demigod's war it goes down hill after that war author is just milking story with some side stories with no main plot The same thing happened to the supreme magus author they can't let go of their masterpiece at their best they keep stretching the plot for unnecessary things

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started out great and it showed me some good potential but then as soon as MC reaches FRONTIER BASE everything starts to fall down now devil system doesn't sound like devil it sounds like Jack of all system and why the hell his sword is so chatty it would be better if you had made a system chatty that would have worked but I Hate that sword and MAN MC's luck is best of all people he gets everything even if he doesn't know he wants it there is no proper power system in this world it's feel like like AUTHOR got cheated by his girlfriend while he was writing this novel so he started to take out his all anger on novels female character self-respect and after some time he writes any plot he wants to write without any big plan

I DON'T KNOW ABOUT THE GUYS WHO ARE SAYING THAT "this novel is good" EITHER THEY ARE GETTING PAID FOR THEIR REVIEW OR THEY JUST HAVE REALLY LOWEST STANDARD FOR A STORY- I mean at one point author doesnt even care about to describe diffrence bw his class and aspect and title The novel started as a mystery which most of the novel do like introduce a character and make a hype about their strength The same thing happened in this novel but after some novel author introduced so many things without any context added new kingdom without telling about them added new power system without describing at one i was just scrolling only to see progress of MCs record and nothing and that also got worst as the time goes.

ALL THE GOOD REVIEWS ARE PAID PAID . REVIEWS I'm at 150 chapters and I gotta tell my head is hurting coz of this novel there is nothing in this story it's tag says ACTION-there is hardly any of it ADVENTURE- it is present but MC adventure in in the relationship of his friends and he is worst MC I've seen so far reading a chinese novel with repetitive plot is much better that this novel

man you really thought you would get away by saying this

why raze isn't saying anything and allowing this to happen