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  • invisible1
    invisible11yr
    trả lời Drei05

    i just read the first chapter and the story is interesting. i like your cover too.

    The Extra's Dominance
    Kỳ huyễn · Drei05
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  • invisible1
    invisible11yr
    trả lời Arlemit

    i read the first chapter and wow!

    Nameless King
    Kỳ huyễn · Arlemit
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  • invisible1
    invisible11yr
     công bố

    [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] this romance story is well written, i like the female characters, the conflict needs development, and i want to know if the ending will be sad or happy

    Story close
    Thanh xuân · Account_nolonger
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  • invisible1
    invisible11yr
    trả lời Account_nolonger

    Thank you for taking the time to read[img=recommend]

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  • invisible1
    invisible11yr
     công bố

    I read the first chapter, and I knew this would be a great story. I like the way the author explains it. The story flows and builds well. Only a minor grammatical error, but overall excellent work!

    I'm an Automaton, That's Right!
    Kỳ huyễn · NAF12
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  • invisible1
    invisible11yr
    trả lời aleksandra_pano10

    thanks for your honest review :)

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  • invisible1
    invisible11yr
     công bố

    great story and i like MC and genres like this. nice writing style but need little improvement about punctuation, the paragraph long, and the number of words per chapter is also comfortable to read,

    My throne
    Lịch sử · aleksandra_pano10
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  • invisible1
    invisible11yr
    bình luận

    you have great story and i like the MC character. But for dialogue, you need to put " between it. keep writing!

    Đoạn này đã bị xóa
    My throne
    Lịch sử · aleksandra_pano10
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  • invisible1
    invisible11yr
    bình luận

    great story

    Ch 4 Third Phoenix Clan
    Grand Ancestral Bloodlines
    Võ hiệp · Awespec
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  • invisible1
    invisible11yr
    bình luận

    i like it. keep writing!

    Ch 1 Chapter 1 Endless Dào
    Endless Dao
    Huyền huyễn · Heartless_Qi_
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