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TimTere

TimTere

Lv14
2022-07-19 đã tham giaUnited States
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  • TimTere
    TimTerea year ago
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    I’m loving the novel so far, but as with dragon monarch systems most recent chapters I feel the description of some things is overdone leading some chapters being majorly dedicated to just describing something. Which is ok so we can clearly picture it even though we’re not there, but I feel it slows down the development of the story itself.

  • TimTere
    TimTerea year ago
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    I love the story and development but the newer chapters have been using this ridiculous stiff language thats hard to follow and hard to understand. The wordage used in the earlier chapters is not only easier to understand but flows easier so if possible I hope it’s changed back.