Lenita_Yerkes

I read the first six chapters and so far it has been amazing. Well I did find one thing cocky lol I commented about it. I think that needs work. Apart from that it’s lovely story keep it up author

I meant the hugging

Lol 😂 I find this cocky. In my country this will never work. You could receive a slap.

I really love this book. The beginning was intriguing keeping you wanting to know what happens next. Writing quality nice, I like your dialogues. Though I think you need to work on your world background. Overall it’s nice story with a lovely plot.