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shameless author review. i am well aware my writing is not top tier, please give me constructive feedback, i am just looking to improve my writing since this is something i enjoy doing. thanks. -Author
thank you for reading
4 chapters in. there’s time to add so much more. it’s not the end of the world
appreciate the feedback. i didn’ think too much about why he cant remember anything, i thought it would be easier to avoid filling the first chapter with backstory
this is a work of art
nice chapter
I enjoyed reading this, nice work