Rouhingan

Thank you I will try to implement some changes according to your suggestions.

The novel starts on a bright and cheerful note. The characters are vibrant and I am sure we will get to know more and more about them as the novel progresses. kudos to the author for having grasped the concept that world-building is the most important thing in fantasy novels. The prologue promises great things to come. Keep up the good work. Will come back soon

The chapter is fun to read and I like the attention to detail. Just a small thing I want to say and that's just my opinion ...there are a lot of consecutive sentences starting with "I". You can maybe fuse them together to make the writing more crisp and compact. Again, just my opinion.

and you made me hungry lol

Nice prologue. Excited to read ahead.