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A masterpiece I love the way you've written the story the plot is very rich and we follow the point of view of several characters who bring their usefulness to the story and a pretty good world building Good work

Hope the MC will not be as overpowered as atticus and affect the developpement of side characters but I still love ur former story Author so keep going on you are the best

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

U have to read more and understand that it isn't as simple as that

A great work by an author that seems to know how to write a great story since the beginning. The good points: Firstly the pacing of the story is fast and not boring I love how it is written without too much useless words Great worldbuiling and powerscaling Fast update for chapters The bad points: Hypocrite and xenophobic mc I know that he seems to have an personality change since the day he obtains his overpowered legacy that it is too repeatable and boring Secondary CD and the FL don't have a proper développement and long développement for exemple in Hunter Academy:Revenge of the weakest the main cast (even secondary characters) evolves and change as the story progresses realistically And finally the romance is just meh without substance Overall it's a very good novel but can be so much improved to be an masterpiece

Having not liked the novel until the end of volume 1 I forced myself to read the sequel and frankly I do not regret. The dialogues are much more fluid and pleasant to read since the arc of the vampire the secondary characters have received a very good development (Erina and Sylvie). the pace of the story moves faster with a main character not too broken the only problem that I have mybe the world building can be a little more developed. This is a modification compared to the first review and I thank you for greatly improving the novel

Interesting

Big sistercon xD

I hope the MC will not turn into a edgylord and villain who wants to destroy the world without proper developments

System POV But the MC is not overpowered and very restricted by the gods Very cunning and smart nonetheless