SeniorTrouble

This only spoils everything. She now owns 1/4 of Hogwarts! This is potentially dangerous, and also means less power for Harry!!!

As I said, the author simply missed an interesting moment. He simply flushed all his efforts like shit down the toilet! He heated up the situation/setting for several days; the girls escaped from Bravos, they arrived in Volantis, they were hunted by killers, all the guards of the city were looking for them, they escaped from the killers and then, when the climax came... The author fucked it all up!

Sunbathe for years in Kansas. Learn to fly and destroy all the kryptonite with laser vision while still in space. Wait for Kal-El to strangle him with a baby and take the growth code. Fly to sunbathe straight into the sun and stay there for tens-hundreds-thousands of years! ❌ Do bullshit. Leave everything to chance.✅ It seemed to me that the author wrote that MC is a genius, a strategist, but it turns out the opposite...

Did Hank shoot at point blank range or did everyone here have the eyesight of a hawk!?

Fucking filler!

If after Kal El's arrival MC doesn't deal with the kryptonite I'm quitting!

I did this with several works and I want to say that after such a long time it becomes uninteresting to read the old one or slightly interesting, but you don’t remember what was earlier in the plot and you have to reread the whole story again (in this case 1.5 books) and therefore it still becomes uninteresting to continue reading... Or you will forget about this novella altogether(((

What Is Dead May Never Die

What the fuck!? I liked everything up until this point, but this!? Dragon was named by Daenerys after her late lover-husband - Khal Drogo!! How the fuck did she name her dragon Drogon if she had never even met Khal Drogo before!?

What a load of crap just to stretch out the plot...