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Nerfed Ultimate skill? Damn.

Don't downplay Howard. You guys have to remember that these Worlds have different physics. No way Vegapunk goes as crazy in Marvel as in One Piece. Marvel ohysics are implied to be close to identical to our own, if not exactly the same. Apart from the mutants and Aliens... And One Piece? That shit's whacky as Hell.

That's too much. He could've just beat them up normally. Those Kids will be scarred for live from the pain.

This is downright cruel. I'd even say somewhat hypocritical. Even if those kids bullied her, that wasn't enough to do something like this. They're just Kids.

I remember something like that too. They said that Bruce Wayne is Batman because their 'ass' is identical or smth. Was funny as hell back then.

Updates' been going down too hmm...

There is a guy you can take inspiration from. Solid scedule, active community, decent writing style. Very steady. Name: Rastislav Story: Sorcerer's Tale Just a recommendation though. Do what you like.

Seems like I am the First one. Nice. Now, about this Story. This has some potential, I gotta say. While there are only 2 Chapters as of now, I can already tell that this going to be entertaining. Now onto some tips. 1. Pay attention to pacing. No big problem as of now, but it's still important to keep in mind. 2. Writing style. Very casual. Can be a vibe, but can get too boring after a while. So, keep it up, but don't do too much. Get serious when it has to and stay casual when nothing much is happening, or smth. Just keep in mind that everything in excess is bad, no matter what it is. 3. Upload scedule. Keep one. Set specific times to upload chapters. Can be once a day or thrice a week. Whatever works. Just stick to it and keep the rest of the Chapters on backlog. To have a fallback in case of IRL circumstances or because inspiration struck outa nowhere and you gotta lock in. Just don't burn yourself out. 4. No Bullshit please. I think we know what that means. Although I'm inclined to believe that that's handled. (Rant incoming) Why did I yap so much? Simple, I want stories to read. Good ones. I don't like when a good story gets discontinued or when it loses its potential. In conclusion. Keep writing. This site needs better fiction.