ZHomeboy

You gotta come up with a way to encourage readers to drop them Powerstones and stuff. Get the ball rolling, y'know?

This story's good so far. Definitely readable, definitely enjoyable. Although I'm not the biggest fan how the timekip was done, I understand. The Info dumps and the way the training plans are written is kinda icky. Almost feels like AI. I think the 'professional' terms make it seem a bit too formal for a story meant for entertainment. But those things are fixable, and it's not too late to improve in later chapters, since these aren't deterring enough for readers to drop the story. I hope I don't seem too critical here, since I genuinely want this story to succeed. More high-quality entertainment is always welcomed.

Thragg's locked in fr.

Yeah, comment section's right for once...

That's a leap beyond logic...

This comment section is sad, man...

Well, at least he did something. A lot of people lack the empathy, not to mention the balls.

No

I don't know what makes you say that. They learned different Jutsus y'know? From what I understand, the Multiple Shadow clone technique is much simpler, although just as dangerous. The 'normal' Shadow clone technique is a more stable version that needs more control to utilize, which makes it just that much harder to master.

Agreed. Humans are social creatures. We can't live in isolation, else we go insane.