Maybonnie

P.S: I have an idea and you know that you could do a parallel story About Asuna (Any) in case you want to do it and when you have no inspiration or just on a whim

You're a warrior who's been through many Chinese novels. I understand, and I think you're almost completely right, including the rest part. Author, please don't die on us!

Although I knew Eolka would die from the novel, it's still sad, and the saddest thing is that I know who will die after our beloved female characters, but I won't say it since it would be an insult to the others. All I can say is: F for Eolka

Ding ding, here comes old May with his explanations. As for the first one, no, in both the novel and the manga there's no evidence that the Han of that reality ever met Shay, so it was just a goodbye. But I like that you give it some backstory since Shay only existed to add that deep despair to the story. As for the master (Any), according to more advanced comments (spoiler) actually is just a salaried employee who found the game fun. Many say she was a woman, and at the end of the novel, all we know is that Moebius screwed up his account and lost money, haha. But that streamer idea is brilliant, honestly. I don't know who said it, but it's a great idea, and having it be Asuna is even better! P.S.: F Eolka

Tfc

Oho oho, this is a great idea! I can already imagine the shura field of those nekomimi, but if you're going to include Raphtalia, I'd put her at 2 stars for her greater physical strength and her heritage and not for her experience. She could even reach 1 star, but her heritage is much better than a human's. By the way, Chloe (cook), will you replace her or keep her there? Because honestly, she's one of the best waifus in Pick Me Up. I'd give her a 7 or something like that.

Mmm... although it's tempting, weren't Kisasha's group all catwomen? I would have put Yoruichi, but that's fine too. Do what you feel most comfortable with, honestly. Sometimes it's better to let your own inspiration flow. You can take some comments as guidance and help, but don't take them personally. The only thing I hope for in the future lots of smut scenes with Han the Stallion, haha! And that they're good. And for Gishlaine, because the story itself is already good. I even feel the essence of what Pick Me Up is.

Well, I just offered ideas; in the end, the final decision is yours. But I'll still fight for Gishlaine! I won't give up on that, even if I have to give up everything!

With everything there I am going to include four video game characters, I am going to put exactly 16, with their respective works: 1. Rika shinozaki (SAO) 2. Hephaestus (Danmachi) 3. Female Shiro (Fate) 4. Cattleya (Queen's Blade) 5. Emery (Re:monster) 6. Vulcan (Beheneko) 7. NyanNyan Visconti (Asobinin wa kenja) 8. Romina (Shield Hero) 9. Celgerus (Returning With Absolutely Nothing) 10. Tsubaki (Danmachi) 11. Iz (Bofuri) 12. Rikka Kusunoki (God Eater 13. Lady Kiri (DFO) 14. Minayle (Monster Hunter) 15. Gemma (Monster Hunter 16. Hailey (Dislyte) P.S: some are almost mechanical, but they are just as good