The_Adder

Ok ..[img=recommend][img=faceslap]

I suggest you read all the remaining chapter or atleast read the prolog of the chapter which say,"I give away too much gold" It might leave a bad tast for the author you know

the story is great and have high potential if followed and rechecked by pro editor, So author try hard and upload more and more do not give up but still. Can you use more correct grammer or atleast in the spelling,I could surely read it but it makes the story less interesting sometimes you know. Suggest you use grammerly a keyboard which is in the appstore like playstore and it will be more better. I don't mean that the current grammer is bad but it is just not perfect yet.

I think this book is turning out to be quite alright after adapting to how the author like to write except there may be some mistakes here and there It is still quite a normal book to read which would be fun with a lot of chapters

good bit not goos enought for me, it was too cruel, and non human..[img=faceslap]

sometime I have a feeling you are weak

wow just hack them to pieces or so. ething

very harsh this is, I remember healer kun from this you know the Heal giy right

man this is not reeally apprpriate right not so cool

and there is also a sama ... 😂