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Don't get me wrong, this is a great story, annoying as hell but great nonetheless. Author, I have some questions (1) why does the MC sometimes act like a regressor? (2) you keep referring to the MC's class as a commoner but he already has a class and no longer a commoner. (3) the MC was level 99 and he doubt he could defect a level 12 otherworlder necromancer why?
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Actually no 😂😂😂, am a skinny dude IRL
That's the point, he shouldn't be eating those type of food yet
Shameless but prideful author here to review my story,Just so everyone knows I just got into MMORPG stories and I was like damn it I might as well write one.What to expect - (1) Some weird but unique characters that might make people wonder if am mentally stable (2) Some ridiculous ability that might make you also wonder if i really put some thought into them or got the idea from 8 years olds [That might be partially true](3) Op mc [Gojo satoru type of op] so if you don't like op mc then I don't know what to say (4) anything you see you get
The author here trying to (I don't know what am trying to do) this book was first called Chronicle of Death, it was rushed and there was a lot of inconsistency in it so I deleted it and rewrote it from the beginning, What to expect ====== 1) Although the main character is Shane Myers there would be other characters that I would write about as this book focuses on the Selected Reincarnators (Or whatever they are called).2) the first Arc would be an introduction Arc, where you all will be introduced to the Mc and the side characters.3) I will change from the Main MC POV to the other Side Mc whenever the Mc is out of commission I will add new info as it comes up and please let me know if you want an auxiliary chapter about the power system
What the heck is this, the world building was okay to one point, for new readers looking to read this crap, I will break it down for you guys. 1) INCEST - the MC took his sister as a concubine and he had 5 children with her. 2) the MC at one point stated that he will not enact slavery but later into the story he does and came up with a fucked up explanation why he did. 3) In order to make the MC look smart, the author made every other people dumb. 4) As long as you aren't German, you are a savage to the MC. 5) Aftera while, the author did not even try to make the MC mediate between other tribal people he just kills them all The author is definitely a German supremist.
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