No system and give him a just a panel and to be honest obito was in class A the best class in school so being lowers than oblito doesn’t mean weak Give him a huge chakra reserve

The betrayal

And I got no PS to give bro plz at least 2 chapter a week

I had high expectations to the novel after the first few chapter but i was disappointed - Too much inner dialogue -it feels like watching a one piece filler -60 chapter the real time in novel is only 2 day

Your has potential dont go on with unlimited inner dialogue man 60 chapter for the first day omg it’s really awful

Too many chapter in this fight to be honest

Great chapter I already spent my stones today tomorrow I will give u my ps

There is no space between paragraphs it’s very hard to read make like before

Make sure no one knows about enforcer bro by contract

Man the heavy chat gpt is making a huge deservice to your good novel u need to find a solution brother

Make the MS one that lowers the Susano requirement on the body and chakra The other that can break increase the the strength of any ninjutsu or Fujintsu

I really liked the novel GJ But the thing that I don’t like that the MC is super bad situation especially the the other mage it feels like he in desperate situation

Bro I has a plot idea I don’t know how much u are in the patreon chapter I will just say it (There are many small clans in konoha that perished due to the three ninja war and the hokage faction scheme u can use the remenant of those clan let the uchiha clan either help them or give their information to enemy village so that they will contact those remenant and betray konoha and then let the uchiha clan capture to appear good or find fault with hokage faction and so on )

Next chapter my friend dont be cruel

Some explanation about the red lightning ?

I like the story verymuch good character development great story progression My only problem that sometimes I felt that the writing is a bit Cringy and made wanna throw up in some occasions Other this the story is PERFECT

Ty for the chapter bro

Gj author

The betrayal 🥲🥲🥲

U can his curse technique to steal at most 3 curse techniques and if he want to steal more he need to give up one of them The thing he can steal should be restricted to (CE - life span -special feature like 6 eyes )