SirZurone

i understand your frustration but this fic in a au universe but I know it is still being out there but you have to remember that I never want insult anyone, if your going to say this you have to hate all of the harry potter community as they have alot of things that go against the characters exp. drarry, snarry and tomarry there are many more examples that "slap" writers. If i have misunderstood i am sorry if not please rethink and see from my perspective

I keep this book to look back and remember my mistakes and improve my writing and your review is part of a bigger group that i use to strive forward thank you :]

Haha lol I guess it is pretty crap it's my first story and I haven't touched it other than when I have been incredibly bored. But I agree all the characters are out of character and I didn't know now to make a likable character

Thanks but I don't think I am that good and I am sorry I didn't post many chapters just people from real world found my page and harrased me but it so lost motivation but I will try and make some more chapter for you

Hey I don't understand what you are saying, do you believe that the story is moving to quick and I do agree with the betrayal and minggt edit some members out of the harem

Well the writers are adamant on keeping him young

It's Peter Parker and in the comics he has pulled a lot of heroines the only thing stopping him was the writers vendetta against him