Barbara_Montez

Did well. Frankly

Personally, I feel this is a great piece. The writing quality is top notch, makes use of a lot of humor and relatable everyday scenes. The updating of the book isn't as frequent as I'd like it to be. The story is developing well, a big slow for a romance novel but I love Tue fact that the author knows what he's doing, bringing the characters out one by ine and lining them up as possible suspects since there's a murder involved. I would really want to see the 9th chapter. Great piece!