Uni_Desires

With bland chapters and low word counts…. When compared to a lot of other works by other people. They push atleast 1k words a day. If the chapters were very long it’d be worth the wait. But they aren’t.

Dunno but I already dropped this so it doesn’t matter

Sorry it appears the summoning circle had an error. Instead of summoning Mordred, you summoned massive debt to world governments..

On it. Summoning mordred

Maybe you should fix you’re updating schedule… The story is kind of getting stale without constant updates. Atleast in my opinion.

Same thing I said before, itachi and sasuke stopped the reincarnation jutsu during, once again the 4th shinobi war. Making up in the process…

What? Hashirama and Madara met again during the 4th shinobi war BEFORE kaguya was revived using Madara’s body… why are they speaking like they just met again…

People found in the earlier parts of the series. Yes it would likely kill then or severely injure them. Not to mention it’s magic from Yggdrasil. However against a Yonko level opponent you would probably need atleast 8 tier spells. I think… power scaling in both is a bit wack.

Yuna Uzumaki reference?

Helloooo! I’ve read enough of this fanfic to probably put in my 2 cents worth on it. First off the idea. The idea of the fanfiction is actually not bad and is quite unique. The main character I personally don’t like the main character. He’s not what I would call stupid, but more dimmer than most. He mostly relies on matatabi for information about the world and its inhabitants. That and his memories. The Writing I don’t really like the writing. I don’t know if anyone else is getting this feeling, but when I read it. I don’t feel anything. A blank text. There is no emotion inside the writing and it’s almost like it’s just descriptive text. I think that’s it?