Idontcarereally

I thought Mary died ???!

The weird symbols again

Like the weird Å and the random £ signs

What was up with all the weird letters? But still good.

It’s good just ADD SPACES PLEASE. It’s so hard to read speech or just in general so please add them in the newest chapters or fix the old ones as well.

Do you talk like this in real life im curious.

Add spaces again it’s just lazy not to have them and makes it way worse to read what was an interesting story.

LEAVE SPACES. This looks really bad and is hard to read.

That would be good. It’s not like you get attached to them in the game anyway. New things just make it more interesting.

I think you rushed th chapters since Harry was glitched. It’s alright but could be a lot better if you took your time.