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While I initially liked the story, the development between Yuzhu and Jinchuan has slowed down to the point where I feel like it’s being dragged unnecessarily. I hope the author would consider picking up the pace more. There’s too much focus on the family connections vs. the development of the couple’s relationship.
Frustrated with Fang Zhi - he’s relying on wrong information and is not using his instincts wisely. I thought he had investigated her background? Why doesn’t he know that she has a stepmother & that their family relationship is complicated?
There are too many inconsistencies on the names of the characters. Daisy is now Lucia — is this just a translation issue? Please review & edit the book again.
So funny!😂😂😂
If you only knew, Max 😂😂
It’s so hard to argue with a smart person😂
I watched the drama first, which was inspired by this book, before I read it. And I personally love the book more!!! Loved how the relationship between ML & FL was described as it grew. I also loved how the ML was portrayed here much better than in the drama. Not only was he strong and formidable as a former military, his character was also imbued with wisdom, intelligence, forthrightness and sincerity. Our FL could not escape his charms even if she wanted to. Great writing from our author!!!💗