Blazzing18

👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 It would have been better if it was a girl they found but scenes its a boy they cant keep it with them on on the ship... so I would hope that something happens were it just dies and they dont have to worry about it and they wouldnt have to worry about where to drop it off and all that either.... or maybe find another one and have it be a girl and have the girl be on there side trying to help and have the boy trying to kill them and by the end the boy dies somehow....

👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 I really really loved this book.... I just wish it wasnt this short... but it is a really really good book!! I hope that u the author come out with another beast taming book but have it be longer and maybe like some of the others where the MC starts in school and gets his fist beast and maybe has a system or u can go with out the system but have the MC hunt to raise the level and evolve his beasts and maybe have the story go to where he gose beyond earth and into space and find other species and places... if ur willing to do another book I have a couple that I can recommend that I think u can get some ideas from and make a great book against!! I really really like this book and read it every day just about and its going to suck that I cant read new chapters about it but I really like the ending!!

I hooe that they dint get together... honestly she deserves someone better and that isnt this little kid that acts like a loser... he shouldnt even have been on the team or even fighting because of his cowardly nature and I hope that the MC and mercury dont let him touch the baby or have anything to do with it... I certainly wouldnt because of how he is and used to be!!! I wouldnt trust him at all woth anything and If I was cassie I definitely wouldnt want him to be with my daughter even though hes a nice kid I would eant her with someone more dependable and reliable!!

She shouldnt be taking that strong of an opponent on by her self yet!!! The MC is a piece of shit to do that to her!!

I hooe that asmos gets his identity revealed in the middle of the battle and have the guild master severely injure him but at the same time have himself severely injured as well and have asmos go for the killing blow when the MC comes out and have the MC kill him and after he kills him have him take all of his possessions and then have the guild master give him rewards for killing a demon and for saving his life and have this spread to the headmistress... hell have this fight get to her and the MCs grandfather and have them get there just in time to see the MC come out and kill the guy with all of his pets after he takes everything from the rift that it offers even... even the boss beast even though they said to leave it he should take it or kill it to be able to gain everything he can then come out and unleash all of his pets or kill the demon/asmos himself right in from of everyone... and have everyone see asmoses true form amd have ot be similar to the statue and have them figure out that the statue is a demon and have asmoses corpse be seen by multiple people so this way you can spread faster that the statue is made after a demon and that the demons either took the king over or hes cooperating with them and he needs to die alone with all of the royal family so that they can stop the cooperation with them.... idk its just another idea

👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 Y not have the MC tell her that he wont use the legendary dragon because its not fair to her because she doesnt have one... im not pitying u or holding back intentionally I want this to be a fair fight and that he has a surprise for her... and when they start to fighg have the MC gring out new beasts... the ones that can to the world and have him have loke 2-5 of them and then have his old aces come out and have him fuse with all of them right infront of everyone... but right before they stay he should tell her that no matter what happens thay sje has to stay in there lifes and especially victorios and that he wouldnt mind her staying around for when and after the baby comes... and during the match have it look like the MC is going to lose and have him basically laying the floor and then erupt with the new beasts if u want to have the MC habe new beasts and hold back on the legendary beast... but after the match y not have the victorias and tamas agencies combine into one to make the beast of the beast agency ever and have them take all of the people from that shity leo guy and basically destroy his agency and with this new agency y not have victoria and tama run it but have all the aces from victorias agency, plus zara and even have the aces from tamas team and maybe even the aces from leos team or at leas have sis and rex from that team be all owners... so it would be victoria, tama, zara, all the aces from Victorias agency now and at least sis and rex from that shity loe guys agency.... I just dont know about anyo e from tamas agency because they werent really that nice and chill... but right after the match is over and the MC wins it would really awesome to have ot so the MC is helping tama and have victoria and his team come down and his "parents" and especially mercury and have her infront of the hole world kiss him and show off that she pregnant and have the MC right infront of the hole world proposed to her... that would be awesome to end it like that then jump to when the baby is born and and they have a huge house so people can stay over and stuff but have everyone always coming by and helping them with the kid and if the MC is going to have god parents for the baby y not have multiple of them being his team, especially victoria because of everything she did, tama because she gave him the orb... well he earned it and especially collin... that would be cool to end it there if it was to end but I would hope thag the book keeps going its really really good

👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 I say let him meet her 1 last time and jave it be that... that she is to NEVER come around again and she will not be part of the grandkids life and uave the kid have the MCs bloodline so this way he/she xan be awesome just like the MC and its mother mercury.....

I find it bullshit!!! She can go to school in a private school where they live... maybe it wont be as great but it would definitely be better then the current situation

he should have nevee showed any of this to these assholes!!!! Especially to the priest!!!

Yo the sister better not die or im definitely not reading this book anymore and going to give a the shittiest review!!