I been reading this book and its really good si fair but I went to go see the chapter titles 263 its say the MC mother dies.... Is that actually true?? Is her soul that something happens because there is still mention of her name in orther chapters l...... I really would like to know before I keep going any farther then I am right now because honestly if the MC and the 2 dirls dont get to stay together till the MC has his original soul or till the original owner dies and the mage is left or the mage gets a new body... Honestly I hope that the MC (mage) gets a new body and way more powerfully then the body then the originaly!!

THOS BOOK IS COMPLETE BULLSHIT THE AUTHOR MAKES THE MC OUT TO BE A PUSSY THEN FIGHT THEN NOT AND THE MC IS ALL ABOUT THE SCHOOL HE GOSE TO YET HE SWITCHES SCHOOLS I FUCKING FED UP WITH THE SHITTIEST AUTHOR IN THE WORLD AND BOOK!!!! THIS BOOK HAD SO MUCH POTENTIAL IF SOMEONE ELSE CAN TAKE IT AND REDO THE BOOK AND MAKE IT BETTER PLEASE DO!!! BUT TO ANYONE THAT WANTS TO READ THIS BOOK FROM THE START OR EVEN KEEP GOING DONT ITS NOT WORTH IT!!! I HAVE GIVEN SHITY REVIEWS BEFORE BUT THIS IS THE WORST AND WILL BE THE LAST BECAUSE THIS BOOK IS NOT WORTH THE PASSES OR COINS ESPECIALLY AFTER EVERYTHING THAT HAPPENS IN THOS BOOK THE MC IS ALL ABOUT HIS OWN COLLEGE AND NOT HE SWITCHES AND TO A PUSSY Vice princip VICE PRINCIPAL AND DOESNT STAY WITH HIS TEACHER AND PEOPLE THAT LOVE HIM AND R NOT ACTUALLY USING HIM AND GOSE TO SCHOOL THAT IS ONLY THING ABOUT ITS SELF AND NOTHING MORE!!!! THIS BOOK IS WOSR THE TOILET PAPER IF IT WAS ACTUALLY PRINTED!!!

Hay Y not have the MC take out a couple more guys and take all of there things and have them rent a ship to come with them and thecan make stops along the way to get there new ship (if they go to the iner colonies) instead of getting one on the outside colonies or have one made/custom mod to whatever is needed and if they staying on outsaid colonies then they can start business on them (not in one place) and scenes they r on there original planet that they started at y now they can start at least 1 business here and this way they can have the DOC to help with it and then they can always know whats going on because she is here and they will trust her 100% then they can setup up 2 more stores or at least they can set up a store in the middle colony and then they find a couple of gangs to buy there stuff and this way they can keep get free products for the first time and more capital to start up and they can also take the guys contact information of where they get there stuff and have theme hire at least 2-4 ships.... 2 to be ready for the gangs or people that want it with-in 48 hours and then u can have the other 2 ships do regularly transport times and all that and on the middle station and the station they started at to get big really big really really big Warehouses that have to line security at least in the building and either have to hire people that the building owners would use this way there r all trained people and the person how and they can use at least 1 or more of these warehouse or buy a building at each colonie and have a basement or some kind or securit tunnel to go to a place that has more supplies so this way when they come on the colonies and drop the merchandise it will never be on the road again so no one can hit there trucks/cars or whatever the MC has to deliver or bring to resupply or whatever the store and they would have to change there routs downstairs and make new places to hid there merchandise stufff and all that because if they end up getting 1 place hit then they would definitely lose way to much and would lose a lot to money and merchandise.... And the MC still has to get the all of the organical mods for the MCAs body so this way she can keep up when running and fighting and everything and anything else it can be used for and maybe get the Alv mods to if she wants and she still has to get 1 sidearm just incase she can use her sniper and the MC needs to have another handgun (just like the her partner has) because honestly only having 1 handgun sucks and it is a big very big inconvenience in a fight when u dont have a second one in ur hand.... ( the shotgun doesnt applie to this situation) hope a lot of things get fixed soon and I cant wait to see what happens next!!!!

Hay Y not have the MC take out a couple more guys and take all of there things and have them rent a ship to come with them and thecan make stops along the way to get there new ship (if they go to the iner colonies) instead of getting one on the outside colonies or have one made/custom mod to whatever is needed and if they staying on outsaid colonies then they can start business on them (not in one place) and scenes they r on there original planet that they started at y now they can start at least 1 business here and this way they can have the DOC to help with it and then they can always know whats going on because she is here and they will trust her 100% then they can setup up 2 more stores or at least they can set up a store in the middle colony and then they find a couple of gangs to buy there stuff and this way they can keep get free products for the first time and more capital to start up and they can also take the guys contact information of where they get there stuff and have theme hire at least 2-4 ships.... 2 to be ready for the gangs or people that want it with-in 48 hours and then u can have the other 2 ships do regularly transport times and all that and on the middle station and the station they started at to get big really big really really big Warehouses that have to line security at least in the building and either have to hire people that the building owners would use this way there r all trained people and the person how and they can use at least 1 or more of these warehouse or buy a building at each colonie and have a basement or some kind or securit tunnel to go to a place that has more supplies so this way when they come on the colonies and drop the merchandise it will never be on the road again so no one can hit there trucks/cars or whatever the MC has to deliver or bring to resupply or whatever the store and they would have to change there routs downstairs and make new places to hid there merchandise stufff and all that because if they end up getting 1 place hit then they would definitely lose way to much and would lose a lot to money and merchandise.... And the MC still has to get the all of the organical mods for the MCAs body so this way she can keep up when running and fighting and everything and anything else it can be used for and maybe get the Alv mods to if she wants and she still has to get 1 sidearm just incase she can use her sniper and the MC needs to have another handgun (just like the her partner has) because honestly only having 1 handgun sucks and it is a big very big inconvenience in a fight when u dont have a second one in ur hand.... ( the shotgun doesnt applie to this situation) hope a lot of things get fixed soon and I cant wait to see what happens next!!!!

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This is just stupid!! Honestly one of the stupidest things I have ever read in a book!!!

One of the biggest things I said was that he just leaves the women and doesnt say anything to them at all... like hes not a little kid that can just take off and do whatever the hell he wants especially when he is supposed be the next person in charge but yet the MC doesnt say anything to the womem because they r to weak or they will want to come or for him not to go and all that.... Then alls the MC has to do is make the women stronger and to have some go out with him and some stay to protect the clan and they switch so that no one can say that the MC is playing favorites when technically he is doing that right now by staying away from the clan (to supposedly wait for people to rise up and come after him or for bigger powers or whatever to come) and the women that the MC has had scenes the beginning should take priority over anyone and even the new ones no matter what and to be honest and fair the MC should be with the girl/woman that is pregnant and be by herside and not off trying to play hero with people that r way above his pay grade!! The amC needs to go back to his clan leave everything to people that know what they r doing and spend time with the girls/women that he has and to build his army and to make everyone stronger and take care to the 2 women that r supposed to bring the MC back (by force) and either brack them or whatever because they r just as the 2 sisters master well at least one of them is the other is powerful but not as powerful and it would be good to have on urside when the time come!!! The MC needs to go back to the clan and fix everything there first then deal with whats left!!

I really like this book and hope that there r chapters starting to come out at least every week if not more then 1 a week like it used to be!! There r so many things that need to be reorganized so that the book and flow again!!! U got way to many new girls in the book for the MC when the old ones dont even have a place and honestly he with the new girls more then the old ones so how is that far to the old ones that have been with him scenes the beginning!!!??? U also have his wife/girlfriend that is pregnant and the MC is no where to be found ever and is always going off and doing his own shit when he should be telling them at least what hes going to do and its not like they can stop him and most of them will want to fight with him so either let them get stronger and go with the MC or he needs to stop taking women in andor he needs to tell them all that they r to be house wifes and thats about it!!! Then u have the MC not even heading back after he has killed all the rapists in the 2 reapists clans and he should have been back at his clan by now and he should be helping organize what everything that is happening and not just being a spoiled little brat that is fu king any hole that walks in his path!! Honestly the MC should be going on dates and spending time with the woman he had before he went and saved all of these girls that where locked up!! And the MC still has to deal with the capital (king,queens,nobles and all the rest of the royalty) and clean up the mess he has made!!! The MC needs to basically kill all the royalty and nobles inside the region he is in right now and start over and he needs an army... like the system/person said that his world isnt safe and he will need a large army to and other races and people from different worlds to kill off whats coming or that is trying to kill the universe!! If he gose with the system/womans suggestion and use the girls he just saved but only if they want to then how will he give them power and/or the rest of the people that want to be on his side??? They system/woman that said all this should have left a place in the system when people come under his command they signed a contract or whatever so they dont at least betray the MC and everyone else and they gain power (from contract bit is the system doing it) over a period of time so something like what happened to the MC doesnt happen to them but it should at least shorten there time to gian power and be faster then the people that wont be under him or have an alliance with the MC (the regular people) that will be at the regular speed and not gain power as fast.... its only fair and honestly the MC cant screw every girl that wants to be part of the army or government or under the MC (doing some other affairs) and have the girls he was first with and even the new ones to be ok with him do them and spending time with them when they dont even get to spend time with him or anything!!! Then u have the 2 girls that r at the MCs clan to take him to see the queen of one of the bigger regions (by force) bit yet the MC still hasnt gone back to his clan and is screwing around at the rapists territory and both of those girls r going to see the sisters master and observe they r going to find out that she is hirt and force them and use them to get the MC to go with them... and the MC knows they r injured and havent heald properly from when they saved the master the first time and honestly the MC shouldnt needed to be where he is right now because no one is going to fight him (like he says he waiting for them to come to him) but yet ges just there for a vacation and fuck basically when he has other higher obligations and things that needs to be done and honestly the girls that the MC is fucking now r way more powerful the the ones he has had at the beginning from when all of this started and he is spending the most time with the new women then the older ones and now its going to be extremely painful for the woman at the lower levels because of how powerful he is... The levels r so far apart that its obvious he is staying with certain ones more then the others or doing the others more then others even though some women where stranger but they where never as strong as they r now!!! And the MC needs to stop going out and not telling people especially the women he is with before he even went to this big fight he was still going out and around doing whatever he wanted and not saying anything so they would at least know!! And honestly y hasnt the MC made all of the women he was first with way stronger then they r now?? It makes no sense whatsoever!!! And this is just most of the biggest stuff that needs to end or be corrected so the book flows the way it used to!!! The way it is now is to messy and all over the place!! I really want to see everything fixed and reorganized and flow better and everything and everyone cought up to what needed then go back into the story!! I hope to see new chapters soon either way!!

I just realized that there where more/NEW chapters out.... I didnt know or even realize till now because its been so long for any chapters to come out that I thought no more where ever going to come out but now I will make sure to keep looking out for more because this book was awesome as lomg as it didnt stop and the MC and his girlfriend and there parents where fine and nothing happened to anyone of them

no just honestly its kinda boring and lonely... I mean yeah u get beasts but they r no human intentions and all that soooo thats what its more about and not being with beasts 24/7 and become a freak that doesnt want to be with a human....

Honestly I just started to read this comic and its ok but the 1 thing that gets me is that all the MCs makes stupid faces when things dont go there way and it is not just this comic but all that comics

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I just started to read this book(on chapter 3) and honestly idk how I should like it so far.... The thing that makes me want to say that the book sucks is because the MC make stupid faces... like come on how can all comics have the same bullshit where the MC makes stupid faces about anything and everything and like I said its not just this comic its all comics!!! And what the hell is up with this girls shirt???

I just got done with chapter 850 and I still cant believe the author puts out so much bullshit in one book!!! I keep reading hoping that the book would be better but it just gets worse and worse!!! It says that the MC is going to be a general and is head of some palace but yet that gose against all of the MCs bullshit laziness and not wanting to fight and always wanting to run away and be a little bitch to be honest!!! Now u have the principal that is supposed to protect his students doesnt and backs down like an asshole and technically the principal of the college that is putting on this stupid little tournament thing lost all the resources in the tournament so how can it sit there an say that it wasnt compensation and wants the MC to become the stupid vice president of there stupid school..... is this stupid principal not scared of his teacher that will actually kill him I mean come on think this through and Y should the MC give anything back anyways its not his fault that its pet used the resources at hand to evolve to the next rank and honestly what can the principal do to the MC anyways when he doesnt have the power to back up what he wants!!!!! This hole thing its so stupid and ridiculous!!

Honestly I think this book would be way better if the the stupid bird wasnt so arrogant and wasnt so demanding!!! And if the MC was smarter with hiw the space in his heasd was supposed to used and not some playground and a habitat just for a stupid bird that thinks to highly of himself!!!

👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 Has the MCs mother tried to become stronger yet or whats up with her??? I mean with everything thats going on u would think she would want to get as strong as possible so she could protect the people and life she has/had here... And how come the MC hasnt called his mother out on how stronget she is??? I mean he supposed to really really smart right so how has he not cought on by now or anyone else for that matter???

I really really really want more chapters to come out and so that the MC can be the best version of yourself she can be.... ummmm honestly someone like this is just wired and should be caged up and not on the actual ship she wants to go to.... And the MC can use a little move violence in her because everything that happened with slave guy..... And there r a bunch of other times the MC hasnt lets say put on a show and all that especially when something happens.... And this would give the MC a perfect time to bring y her partner is so fast with everything like reflexes and all the other stuff natural about the body that can be upgraded too and how she can get the mods too scenes the doc is right there!!!

ummmm honestly someone like this is just wired and should be caged up and not on the actual ship she wants to go to.... And the MC can use a little move violence in her because everything that happened with slave guy..... And there r a bunch of other times the MC hasnt lets say put on a show and all that especially when something happens.... And this would give the MC a perfect time to bring y her partner is so fast with everything like reflexes and all the other stuff natural about the body that can be upgraded too and how she can get the mods too scenes the doc is right there!!!