keep it up it a good work

is this guy the progenitor of this world

half meter chain really? main here I thought it's gonna be interesting. but this 😔

I hope u improve the fight scenes and make them a bit more vivid rather than writing technique names write the technique utilisation and the fights wud become exciting.

is this guy trying to be a team guy?

It's going to be real hard for the author to write fight scenes now. there is a reason for most authors going with swords and spears as main weapons. it's easily visible in other novels too I dk i just hope author is a professional in describing fight scenes now or its gonna be a great bummer. handling of such a complex weapon in fight scenes I wonder how exciting he can make just thinking about the possibilities makes it interesting but I don't wanna get my hopes too high cz if the fight scenes ended up becoming brain dead then I will be even more disappointed.

I mean why did he present space and time type authorities if he didn't want them idk

I dunno. but i m kinda conflicted here. I mean he could have known who were the strongest and best guys in the tutorial who survived and befriended them instead of going with some trash. but oh well author wants to go the kinky route so i guess i will just read for now

what a disappointment sigh even after fighting gods he is an idiot.

author pls for the love of God don't go the harem route even the original didn't go harem at least till b4 the final chapter.

pls don't make it a harem. go with yaoyao only

yup nothing learned literally. I can see where the story will progress like mc in this life will be betrayed again and again and end up facing an enemy he can't win start crying b4 that unknown sul will possess him and kill all but there is a twist that unknown soul will be shown corrupt/evil atleast initially and mc will spent 500 chapters trying to solve that. like a curse or meter and losing himself to corruption. the stories have become so typical. hey author, if reading this and u had the same plan then I beg u plz change I want to read something new I will really appreciate it if it's something new.

u k typical brain dead mc lol

I dunno from my pov after reading till now he seems more like edgy idiot who will be betrayed again. I mean that's how it goes in all other novels hope author doesn't screw it up again

bro everything is good but savarkar really? have u read him accurately? did u misjudge him to use him here. pls research a bit more on savarkar he is not what he has been portrayed uk. any historians (not politicians uk what I am talking abt) on both the sides of the aisle will say that

the hell. at this point I realise mc is becoming brain dead sigh. why is he becoming more dumb with each passing chapter? he could see the sin of pride in his status and as someone who read countless novels (that's what the author said) he shud have already pieces almost everything and here he is still a dumb. author plz don't dumb him down it makes all the previous chapter about the past life waste

w8 did u just decrease his IQ in this chapter. there is no way he shud react like that if there is so many changes in his status and a loss of memory and village destroyed at least he shud have thought it was Zephyrs doing and questioned him. he became dump sigh

I k I just wanted to comment without actually seeing I was replying sigh

the thing is the ending of AoT doesn't make sense to me still. we love code geas not because lelouch ended up becoming the villain but him becoming the villain meant something there. but eren becoming villain didn't work bcz nobody understood him including Mikasa (that's y ymir chose her ofcourse atleast thats what iseyama told us). seeing eren in the managa and in the anime felt like watching a misunderstood genocider who just wished somebody understood him. the reason i say this cz in erens msg to armin post rumbling he changed from giga Chad eren to crybaby eren which tells at least if Mikasa didn't cheat him on his hope he could have done something else but nobody came and he became the gigachad genocider. that was y i was disappointed with the character development of most of the charas in the anime in the end (mostly all eren friends including Mikasa as at the end she couldnt make her courage and ended up fking the horseface lol). of course iIwould also include eren too cz if he remained the gigachad and not a crybaby in the end that wud have been a real character development even though borderline evil but still rather than being crybaby like a typical young eren he cud a justified by saying u all forced me so i guess let me bear the consequences and gone with a gigachad bang but he fkd up. again ymir's choices with choosing Mikasa sud have been explained a bit more cz i see Mikasa as a not developed cheater cz her heart was with eren even in the end but her vgna was with horseface. (atleast move on completely if u r moving on) I wonder how wud Jean have felt when drilling her and she spoke -cough!- eren lol. anyways wanted to get my frustrations with the og ending out so wrote it.

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