Cevahir_Gezer

There is neither a teacher nor a resource to learn from. How can he learn something from nothing? Also, Naruto has no money other than his poor orphan allowance and genin income. He has no money to spend on the various materials he buys. I don't think the Konoha public library contains advanced elemental manipulation techniques (it is jonin level for anything that involves pure elemental manipulation.) So it's really stupid and illogical for Kyuubi His behavior is also ridiculous, and it's even more ridiculous that he's not being interrogated by the Anbu because of his change in behavior. It's also stupid that Jiraya doesn't interact with him. Without a teacher, he could even learn half of what he supposedly learned on his own. cannot learn, there is no opportunity to access almost all of what you have learned.

It's a really shitty translation in MTL quality. No effort, Google translate translates it better. Don't even read it. Also, in the first chapter, it's obvious that the author doesn't really know Bleachi. He's also a thief because he didn't write in the description that it was a translation.

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Tftc

It's a really nice fanfic, but it is not possible for slyhp who is under 5 years old to form such complex thoughts and sentences. A child under 10 years old cannot form such thoughts and sentences. A child under 5 years old does not understand romance either.In fact, the number of people at Slyph's age who know 2+2 is less than 1 percent, which means that he is learning magic in an exoteric way. It is even more ridiculous that he understands this not only by trial and error and repetition, but in terms of understanding the concepts, after all, children at that age sometimes have difficulty even making sentences, they have a lisp. They speak in a different way, they are illiterate, they lack the ability to do the simplest addition, it would be better if you write taking this into account.

He is not madara, he cannot perform izanagi with a delay of months. His izanagi is valid for less than 5 minutes. If the body disappears in 5 minutes, people will notice.

Is this a Chinese fanfiction?

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He calls a shitty Chinese fanfiction his fanfiction. Theft of labor, I hope you share the name of the original story. The translation is a little better than MTL, at least you changed the names and removed some Chinese elements.