good piece and great work.

great piece of work

great work

l love the suspense and the gradual and steady evolvement of the characters. The word level is captivating and engaging. This indeed a great work. Love the storyline as well.

great piece keep it up.

Quite interesting, the story has a gradual and steady way of carrying the reader along as the story builds. So far, the characters are perfect, the plot is engaging.