Mood LOL

Thank you for your honest feedback. I fully understand that this story has ALOT of Grammatical errors that I nor my computer pick for some reason (My google doc is crap picking errors up for someone reason. As for the chapters that feel like essays I just uploaded another chapter with a different writing style is that the essay one or is it the first 3ish?

I LOVE the beginning, like- unexplainable love it. How the system is explained, how its thought out and created is fucking bloody awesome. And the the first chapters name- that got me, so unexpected yet correct from the first few sentences. How its written and how the world is created and the story grows- unbelievable 11/10 book should be printed and sold. And im not even done reading yet LOL

I love the cover and the way the book draws you in, making you want to read it more and more. Honestly really good writing from chapter one and the plot can bee seen on good foundation by summary. World building is really hard to make and understand but it is done beautifully here.

At first I was sketchy about it, I never read books with odd covers its a weird thing I do but the summery was a hook and I was a wee fish and now I can't stop reading it

Get it me or else u will never learn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love how u write!!! I love the story idea and how u create it over the chapters!! Most stories depend on their summary which usually is weird but urs was catchy!!

I really like tyrone guy (I'm not sure how to spell it) He's my favorite and I like his personality. as for the story its very interesting and I like the plot and development. Keep up the hard work author!

I really like how it starts and the style of the writing it brings the story to life honestly one of the best writing styles i've seen and i'm picky about what I read.

when the character said let me help you smack some faces made me laugh even tho it was a very serious moment lol I love the names and the book cover as well as the the latest chapter being a cliffhanger it seems it could end good or bad

I think my fav part was when they teleported to another kingdom and all they had to say was 'damn' lol. That just made the mood. As for the progress im very excited to see what happens next!

I really love the name Yuna I think it was spelled. I have never seen a name like this before and it makes the story really unique. So far I kinda like the maid, I know they arent the main character but just kinda how they graze the chapter with their character is chilly. As for the plot im very excited for chap 15!!.

i'm very excited for the next chapter! I like the cliffhanger too. The way the world sounds make it seem almost majestic yet pretty and the birds like they work together