now it's looking good and bit logical

Evelyn

Ragnarok -the supreme one

Evelyn

Noah

Thanks champ for your benevolence...

Thank you for your thoughts. I'll do my best and keep supporting my work.

Shameless author review. This is my first novel and also my fantasy of an evil, dark, handsome, and overpowered protagonist. I was exhausted from reading the number of woke and good-for-nothing MCs for the past year and finally decided to create one myself. I hope I'll deliver what I want to showcase to the world through my words and I thank all my readers who spend some minutes of their life reading what I want to say. Please add my novel to your library, if you like. Constructive criticism is always welcomed by me and please guide me with your wisdom and critiques throughout the end of the novel.

chad

fool

ahaa...