No es el mejor fanfic pero tiene un gran potencial pero su mayor problema es que sigue cambiando del inglés al español. . . . . . . . . It's not the best fanfic but it has great potential but its biggest problem is that it keeps switching from English to Spanish.

Finally, a dxd fanfic different from the others, bro, your fanfic is good and interesting, thank you for the chapter and please bring more . . . . . . . . .

Thanks for cap

it would be interesting to put the xenovia

you make a fanfic better than many other authors