Elementary72

I've given this book my all and hope that it comes across with both a strong sense of adventure and keeps you wanting more as the story progresses

lovely classic style writing. I enjoy the basic flow of the words. I even listened to the book like an audio book since the grammar is nearly perfect. The story has a good essence however I got a long way to go before I can conclude on the story content

flight is awesome I love the build up

past few paragraphs help build a piece of the world

perfect contextualization for charcter views

paragraph structure was good however the action would be rocking the baby back and forth as shaking babies is dangerous

like this paragraph finally context in full to a charcter

didn't see this coming

this sounds like it should have followed before the child had his blessings anounced

the scene still hasn't been made