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once a day to once every three days*

The writing quality is good and doesn't break immersion. Stability of updates seems to be varying from once a day to once every four days, hence the low rating. Story development seems fine, everything is slowly introduced and there is no abruptness. Unable to judge character design so far, the only flaw I have seen in the MC is how quickly he got over his grief. World background is fine but a little lacking.

Thanks for the chapter! By the end of this novel he will probably be his himself with all of these powers.

Thanks for the chapter!

Thanks for the chapter!

Thanks for the chapter! I love the dynamic that is forming between them already, it’s funny to watch Jin be helpless.

Hopefully the Webnovel contract doesn't cause you to burn-out, especially with your real-life job and all of that. I hear from other authors that it is very demanding, requiring you to release at least 1k words per day, and you don't get paid too much. I love this novel. though! The quality, story-telling, and everything else is superb!

That is a lot of realms-

This, right here, is a hidden gem. The only thing that holds this novel back, in my opinion, is its relatively slow release rate. The writing quality is great, and I have only spotted one or two mistakes, mostly being run-on sentences. I can't judge story development, world background, or character design yet, since there has only been 3 chapters released as of this review. Stability of updates seems to be fine as far as I can see; one every four days. If you want to read this story, I would wait until it at least has ten chapters, that way you can binge it a little. Overall a great read, however! [img=recommend]

Thanks for the chapter!