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The rule is broken...

Should I try?

Sorry my bad, I don't know much about mana zones. I like it btw

I thought he wants girls?

Im sorry to say this but I don't feel him being on a vice captain level. A good story actually I liked it. My only problem is his spells and it's costs is disappointingly lame.

If this is the same as Kaido or not, it's confusing. Give this a mastery. Monstrous durability didn't even show even when he fought the wolves. The way you described it as flared disappointed me especially when he already trained for two years. I don't know if I read it right or not? It's what I understand my bad. ☺️ Just confused need more clarification.

Daym, I just put a comment about this. Sorry about that. Ain't criticism tho just pure curiosity.

I like it and finally someone made A Ben 10 Fanfic. I have a question tho as I'm not content with the Ultamatrix being soul bounded on him. Will he change the appearance of the ultimatrix? coz Daym Hydra once he was found will be on his tail thinking they could get the ultimatrix like Bilgax you know. As far as I know the appearance of the watch is so eye catching.

I like it author but can you add since it's Disney or cartoons based, can you add some scene where there are singing scenes.

I like it. Although the rewards that he's getting always related to technology then just sharing it with everyone it's good. But I am hoping to find something that he owns like the wraith's power and more like an upgrade. Keep up the Good Work!!!