Author here I am new to writing a fanfiction novel. I will make this story interesting as much as possible. English is not my first language. So, sorry in advance for any grammatically error, since autocorrect mostly correct the spelling mistake. Thankyou.

I will explain why Albus is basically agreeing to everything Jason is saying and as for others they follow what Albus says. But I understand your view and I will try to the characters more like realistic and sorry for this I will try improving on this segment from the here on.

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Author here I would like your review on this Fanfiction.

Thank you for the review and I will try to improve and make the story more interactive and interesting thankyou.

It will be kind of you to remove this review since it affects my views. Thank you for providing a helpful advice.

The system has helped him in allocating the battle mage class.

Classes are determined by the world in which they live in the shield hero series there are two world (one destroyed)and classes are given according to evolution of that specific world.

Thank you for your review and I am going to improve my writing skills. I have just started writing fanfiction and English is not my first language, I will try to improve. Thanks Fright Knight 88. The story I am writing is mainly focused on the main plot, The story in the shield hero world will be clarified in the future. The reason for this is that I wanted my character to be Kinda of OP.

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Rising in the Shield hero world with a system, my novel I hope you enjoy this one compared to the previous one. Please give it a try and share a honest view.

Rising in the Shield hero world with a system, my new novel I hope you enjoy this book and feel it better than the previous one.

Started a new book with name of Rising in the Shield hero world with a system. Hope you read it and share your view.

Thank you for your valuable reply and this my first time writing and I understand that I am not good at I will try to Improve or drop and start a new with this learning experience. I will be honest with you at I thought it would be easy but writing this story with collage life is a bit difficult and it's my fault and I understand. Next time when I write a new fanfiction I will try my very best. I will continue writing this for my own experience to understand where I lack and where I need to improve. Thank You!

"Hello, I'm the author, and I'm giving my fanfiction a 5-star rating. As a new writer, I was initially considering dropping this story, but now I've decided to continue it. I hope everyone enjoys the story. I apologize for any language errors; English is not my first language."

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I think its's multi scale