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Totally agree

I want to hug him

Thank you for this lovely chapter!

I really enjoy every new chapter of this book. I have a lot of fun. I like David and I hope he will be happy. Thank you, Author, for your great work.

Very interesting story. No wonder it won first prize. Beautiful, moving scenes. I know this book has a sequel at another link, but here I leave this note, because if someone doesn't read this book because they think it's too short, they're missing out on a lot. There are only 18 chapters here, but there is a full version on WN at another link. I recommend it! The book is a bit dark, but also full of hope. It speaks beautifully about how love can save a person.

Love the setings.

This book is so good that wow, just wow! So many emotions! So many events! Steve seems cool at first, then mean, then sweet.... Um, yummy cookie! Delicious!

I think I waited as impatiently as Hubert did, and now I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

I enjoy and appreciate this book for how beautifully and deeply the emotions of the characters are portrayed. There are also many beautiful scenes here.

For me, this chapter is very emotional, touching and beautiful. It's as if the physical closeness allows Adam's soul to be cleansed. Thank you for portraying this important scene so beautifully.