Nikitanis

So OP! Like it! She needs it because shit is gonna find them all...

Долги юридически идут с наследством, которое можно и не принимать. Но как оно работает здесь - вопрос. Возможно сверхъестественная сторона обязывает возвращение долга даже через детей и неважно, согласны они с наследством или нет. Ну Или Десмон принял наследство и расписался не дочитав...

Well, Thor won't forget this. He's not the God of Thunder anymore, or even the God of Hammers... He's the God of the Little Spear now! Patron of little swords! God of "little snakes!" It's even curious what kind of prayers can be offered to such a unique deity... Probably NOT VERY BIG ones!

wait, who is who and what in this pair? I need to know!?!

Когда устаю переводить то да, с переводчиком)

Obviously the Girls will ignore this. Or the System will blur the picture and sound. Or they are all already sitting there with brainwashed and just don't know it. Classic.

a good fanfic would be if it was written by a good author. I'm not even sure what to write here myself, since the whole fanfic is a big hole. There are some good ideas here. But ideas alone are obviously not enough to make a good story. Otherwise, this is another story about a "Genius NOT young master" with abilities that are unknown to anyone from earth to heaven. What? He didn't become strong right away? Well, then the insurmountable wall of plot armor comes into play. so... Just try it and you'll understand what the problem is. And if not... Everyone has their own tastes, I guess?

Another bland story with an absolutely unbalanced main character. Over the 80 chapters I've read, MC is already stronger than most of the Verse characters - right down to individual members of the Spider Troupe. And I would have accepted this fact if the Main Character "Deserved" his abilities, but... no. He won them in gacha. The number of golden fingers in the wrong place on MC increases with every tenth chapter. In general, the MC is a typical Mary Sue. All his plans go well or even better. All his opponents are obviously weaker and stupider than him. The rest of the characters in the story simply bend under his will, unable to make their own decisions - or simply deprived of this privilege. (I might have gone a bit overboard here, but in general this is my personal subjective opinion) Also, over all the past chapters, the only thing that is reported about the main Character is that his name is Lan. That's all. Well, he's also kind of thin and sometimes handsome? There were no other descriptions besides this. In the end, I simply cannot accept such a high rating for this fanfic. It is simply tasteless with a main character who is more of a function than a person. I consider further ranting unnecessary - that's all.

Chapter is good. Life is good. Good!

I think this is just chapter from baki with few additional words... Please continue!