Atimo

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Why would a teenager live alone in a different city/state far away from his family? A very strange story setting! And the setup is lacking

I second that!

One of the best works on WN in my opinion.

Doesn’t reflect years of experience as military personnel!

I thought that was the ring function?!

Chapter 28, skipped few chapters. Good luck!

I am being very sincere when I say interesting core idea, but I couldn’t continue reading after few chapters because it is poorly executed in my opinion. It can be better so please do your best to improve the writing to be less cheesy.

First, good work and keep going. The start seems promising and well written I guess. Second, since it is unclear how you will steer your story, I can only say I think Luna so far more troublesome than being useful asset to the MC for being impassive and childish. Generally I avoid "Harem" and "Comedy" because it is clichéd! Good luck! (^.^ `)