LEGENDARYDRAGON

Just write Bus stop instead of Haltestelle

The Story is very entertaining and very good written but I always have the feeling that most of all in the first 25 chapters that the chapter are to short Like very short otherwise it’s good

Hold up isn’t he like 16 years old and wasn’t she the senpai of Gojo when he was an in Highschool. So that means she is like over 25 years old

This Sounds Like a corny Billionaire falls in love with an ordinary girl type sentence

No harem

Batman would be proud

I always wanted someone to translate this fic and it is by far one of the best translated fits I have read since awhile it makes a lot of fun to read because the translation is so good.

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*King Pin

The Story is very good but I keep getting the feeling that the Author doesn’t know sh*t about Naruto. First he can copy Jutsu at first glance even though he sucks at ninjutsu which he himself stated. Then he can use Shadow Clone Jutsu with only Genin level Chakra and he inserted a One punch man technique magical in the Jutsu storage which doesn’t exist in the Naruto verse only in One Punch man.