The writing is excellent, no doubt. Even though I'm on chapter 55 it's definitely a story that stands out from the others, of course it has quite visible mistakes, Mikoto development is quite null so far I'll probably have to rewrite my review if something happens. Dear author, your way of describing everything is certainly out of the ordinary but doing it every chapter for unimportant things is certainly tedious for me, the development of the other characters is not great either, almost null except for Agatha. The abrupt changes of perspective is also a problem, but as I say, I have yet to read the other half of the story. Too many names without any importance and well the dialogues are not bad but definitely can be improved.
But it was definitely a good read.