Flux_XimuX

Honestly...... I would not give this book a 5 star since it still have some flaws despite its good plot for a fanfic But others making a review too low just for a 'yuri' event according to them that is considered netorare that does not even affect the plot or is not that significant in the progress of the story made me do otherwise........Since i don't want the rating of the story to become too low despite its uniqueness

Didn't seem like that to me.......... Dude is just overly sensitive It's just a couple of sentences and if you bother reading....... It didn't even damage the integrity of the plot nor the story....

Short but the story was there, it was very concise and consistent with the theme... the only regret is that it ended early and there are a lot room for growth.... But maybe that part is what makes it unique as there are no unnecessary nonsense and straight to the point.

You do have a point but remember you've read the story...and therefore most of your POV comes from nadia herself and therefore her Ego in the story has influenced your judgement... Then what about Lucas? He literally doesn't know everything... He thinks everything is fine only to see that his world wasn't really full of colors... He doesn't really care about every intrigue that is happening, he only wants to be with Nadia... If the reason for her doing so is him, He doesn't want her to do so even if it meant death... He literally chose to escape yet was cut of by her decision... and for him doesn't that indicate of her betrayal, from his perspective she just want to cling into that power and never truly love him, for him if she loves her then couldn't she accompany him no matter if its life or death, knowing that their suffering would be where they are with each other... gamble their life into which they are on their own, not controlled and oppressed by those like Yimen. You told that Nadia is doing it for Lucas, but for Lucas she would've told him if she really love her... and escape together with him... Which explains the intricate contradiction of thinking when it comes to love...

Ill give it a full five star for writing such stories... Personally i wanted to right one as well but give or have no effort and time to do so.... This is one of the many answers that could happen to the numbers of ntr/cheating stories out there.... The only thing lacking is the depth and the detailed version of what happened as it seemed kinda rushed... Some scenes could be made into more chapter with more details but bassicaly the plot of what could happened after is cramed in the 2 chapters

The story/premise is unique..different from others of the same genre as it took the path of the mc knowing what's happening, he solos this problem unlike some that take the path of talking about such power...He's had his backstory revieled like a mirror... How he start of as a powerless good guy that ended up being distorted by the worlds cruelty. Updating stability is 4.. considering that 4 months ago that have major updates... Follow up chapters/update stability is incomparable from before Story development is 4.... Considering that this premise would only focus on one thing... which would limit its potential which is Cuckold (Yes the premise of the story give it, its characteristic of how the story will turn, it exposes its novelty and at the same time, the premise itself would be the limit of the story in terms of story development). Character design is good as it shows certain backstory... containing how a good guy turned into a villain... His obssession with the word power...and how power itself crushes his dream, which makes him blind of what and who is around him and how he wants to change... World backround is still a question since not much is revealed but ill give it a 5...

As of now i think its worth a 5, it has diverse characters and the depth of world building is there as well.... We dont get OP mc... but the MC is a smart fella