I have no idea why the author just started bashing Jiraya and Orochimaru out of nowhere, and turned Tsunade to some unsung hero that is fed up with her team mates. instant drop, instant 1 star.

This has potential and a different take from the normal "reincarnation" stories. the pacing felt a bit fast but that's OK since there are only 2 ch while writing this review

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the pacing still bothers me but It looks like the events will get better i always love the part were the mc grindes

Is this the first draft of the authors first chapter ? he has another story with the same name but the first chapter is longer and a little bit different

I only left this review as support for the story as it seems promising. the pacing is messy in the first chapter as this is apparently the authors first attempt, i will update this review as the story updates

Not bad for a first chapter . the three figures were just cannon fodder which was disappointing ,i expected them to be more relevant .and also the pacing is kinda off ,but i enjoyed this chapter and i hope to see more .