Lukas_Laurentino

F Akira Toriyama 😭😭😭😭😭😭.

Wait a minute, seriously, this son of a bitch has everything to be broken but is a complete piece of shit, or do you have shit in your head? If the protagonist is a monster then make him an imbecile monster, seriously he has complete knowledge of what is going to happen and instead of training like crazy he just goesof off, no matter how good this story is this is a shitty hole in a script, Damn, it's going to be that frustrating in the house of the bitch who gave birth to you, I agree with the others who complained about this story.

Why don't you make a protagonist son of Zeus and legacy of Poseidon, besides making him very powerful it would still be consistent with the title, it's difficult to find Percy Jackson stories with a son of Zeus, Poseidon and Hades are outdated, make one crossover with Harry Potter and DxD, the story of Percy Jackson can take place at the same time as Harry Potter or take place later, like at the age of twelve the protagonist goes to Horwguats and he goes until he is fifteen when the story of Percy Jackson and the lightning thief, from then on you vary between both, at nineteen you finish percy jackson and start dxd together with the heroes of Olympus, it's just an idea.

Nice man,nice.

In the planetarium of worlds is where the multiverse is located, but not just one but infinite multiverses, in other words a cluster of multiverses, the new 52 are just the main multiverses, each universe is infinite in size and has infinite superior dimensions, above the planetarium of worlds there is the bloodletting that is the essence of the entire multiverse above that there is the sphere of the gods which is not a dimension but a layer of reality, the fourth layer to be precise, and it is where Zeus and other gods live, I must say that the sphere of the gods is immeasurable in size, and that Zeus lives in skyland, where he has infinite superior heavens and each heaven sees the previous one as a dream and Zeus is on the superior scale of the gods of the heavens, after all he is part of the quintessence.

Well, Typhon is the father of monsters, the number of children he had was immense, and you can play God of War and transform them into a race like minotaurs, ogres, goblins, trolls, slimis, dragons, among others. , and even ghouls, vampires, werewolves, there are so many possibilities, you can put monsters from other worlds like chimera ants, you can do solo leving like all those monsters and dungeons, have imagination.

Personally, I would prefer Zeus, stories about the sons of Hades are very common in the Percy Jackson fandom, Zeus not so much, and I recommend that you mix this story, because Percy Jackson, just Percy Jackson, doesn't stand alone when it comes to a long story, you can combine it with dxd, shinmai maou no testament or anything else that could give greater possibilities, or do something so original that it looks different, but I admit, son of Medea, this was brilliant.

This is called paranoia, he already abandoned a fic with the same theme, reincarnated as Zeus and everything, but only 7 chapters in and it was abandoned.

The only mistake in this story is not having dialogues, not much interaction between the gods, I don't know, it seems like I'm watching a story without much character depth, if you knew how to make the most of it you would have used the ten years of war in the story, it was too quick , one moment Hades is having an internal monologue then boom, war, and the transition isn't the best, we don't know if Hades is simply explaining something that he knows about the war or is simply actually in the war, you only understand later.

Chiron seems more Apollo to me than Apollo himself hahaha, if they are lookalikes, that would be something interesting.