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I'm currently planning for another novel, but since this is discontinued, could you tell me what you were predicting? (For feedback purposes)

Final year and it's difficult to keep up, I am currently writing up a plan for a new novel, and I explained a bit about it on the aux volume. It will take a few more months, but I want this to be long-term, so I will be writing chapters in advance and planning out my writing/studying work.

tysm bro, I'll be uploading 4 chapters over the next two days

It'd be a spoiler if I said why I used this troupe

If the MC always win, then their won't be much struggle and development.

Thanks for pointing that out, it should be fixed. Tell me if it isn't though.

That means a lot! But I've tried to hint at what his personality is like, but I feel it's disconnected at times. So I'll try my best to make it top-tier.

If there are any issues regarding any chapter in the novel, give genuine feedback in this comment section. Don't say it's bad, at least explain why so I can fix the work (pls).

You're right, it doesn't really reflect a lot of the things that happen in the story. I will rewrite this chapter and a few other chapters since the writing and character aren't all that consistent later on. (I'LL TRY MY BEST AND THANKS FOR THE FEEDBACK).

Hopefully, the end result sorta makes sense. By the way, I will be re-writing some chapters in December since some things don't really make sense in the novel