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RayPrime

RayPrime

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Love Fiction

2022-01-09 đã tham giaIndia
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  • RayPrime
    RayPrime2d
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    Menma's Rasengan would have been better.

    Buddha's Palm
    More than a Dragon Warrior
    Phim ảnh · Emmanuel_Capricorn
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  • RayPrime
    RayPrime2mth
    trả lời DaoistjLm6g1

    then y didn't u edit it before uploading it

    Đoạn này đã bị xóa
    I am Baelon
    Diễn sinh tác phẩm · DaoistjLm6g1
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  • RayPrime
    RayPrime3mth
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    No

    Also should I make it that Kushina is alive or no?
    A Nara with a Level System, Ten Shadows & Shadow Extraction In Naruto.
    Tranh châm biếm · sPenK_XD
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  • RayPrime
    RayPrime4mth
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    is this an mtl translation or translated from other language?

    Ch 1 1 - No memory, not very surprising.
    Perfect creation; reviving ace later on
    Tranh châm biếm · Denre_Import_9873
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  • RayPrime
    RayPrime4mth
    trả lời hero4hire

    'An'is technically correct, as we are reading it M H A seperately we are pronouncing it as 'Em' a vowel like sound so, An is correct.

    An MHA fan in Naruto
    Tranh châm biếm · David_F365
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  • RayPrime
    RayPrime4mth
     công bố

    For the word count of these chapters, which is very low, the updates are bad. Not much character development, very passive MC, forced plot, has potential, could be improved. P. S. Dont make it harem and improve the writing, I will change the review.

    How to die at Marvel
    Phim ảnh · Monk_of_Souls
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  • RayPrime
    RayPrime5mth
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    what about Mahito's skills? didn't he kill him?

    {Satoru, since you killed Mephisto with your own hands, his ability "DRAGON LIGHTNING" is ready for yours to take.}
    Gojo Satoru- Adventure Through The Multiverse
    Tranh châm biếm · Yokai_Fenyx
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  • RayPrime
    RayPrime6mth
    trả lời PebbleDash

    Nah, this is to increase word count

    Aermir, recognizing the gravity of the situation, knew that he could no longer afford to underestimate Smalljon's newfound strength. With a renewed sense of urgency, he brought his combat skills to the forefront. No longer relying solely on his speed to evade, Aermir expertly employed his swordsmanship and cunning feints to take control of the battle.
    A Druid In Game Of Thrones
    Ti vi · KuroWashi1903
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  • RayPrime
    RayPrime10mth
    trả lời Cedric_7512

    bruh even if he did save lyanna, he still let the war happen, what about the lives that are lost in it. and he saves elia and probably lyanna, for what bcoz they're nobles! ? , just for the favour that their families might owe him!?

    Ch 26 Part 26 - Oh ye of little faith
    Lannister's Sin of Pride
    Ti vi · Cedric_7512
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  • RayPrime
    RayPrime10mth
    bình luận

    oh the irony, he lets lyanna and everyone that is involved in the war die, and just because he saves elia martell we are supposed to rejoice?

    Ch 26 Part 26 - Oh ye of little faith
    Lannister's Sin of Pride
    Ti vi · Cedric_7512
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  • RayPrime
    RayPrime10mth
    bình luận

    the fic was going good and u just butchered it since the start of this voyage

    Ch 28 BIRTH OF THE SHADOW ASSASIN
    A JEDI IN WESTEROS
    Ti vi · REALMSINUS
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  • RayPrime
    RayPrime10mth
    trả lời SadGasoline

    atlas is cousin of zeus, nephew of kronos

    Days and nights passed, storms and earthquakes ravaged Mount Otris. The sounds of punches echoed like thunder on the battlefield. The once great dwelling of the titans was now completely destroyed. What was once a towering mountain guarding the titan's abode had become a leveled terrain with numerous craters and bodies of divine entities scattered around. In the field, only three vague figures could be seen amidst the battle. The first was Cronos, holding his scythe above his head, while a strange green and dark light gathered on his weapon. He was preparing his final move to kill this terrible being. Meanwhile, the other two figures were Atlas, the physically strongest of the titans, and Inmo, the titan slayer. Atlas was using the last of his strength to hold off Inmo so that his brother could deliver the final blow. However, his enemy proved to be unmatched in the world. Even after so many titans had died, they had never seen their enemy's blood. About to lose, Atlas heard his brother's voice saying, "Step aside." Atlas quickly disengaged from the hand-to-hand fight with his opponent, stepping to the side.
    Survival Manual in the Dawn of Time.
    Phim ảnh · Hora_Do_Mori
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  • RayPrime
    RayPrime10mth
     công bố

    I'm only not reading this is because of harem tag.

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  • RayPrime
    RayPrime11mth
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    Atlas is the nephew of chronos not brother

    Days and nights passed, storms and earthquakes ravaged Mount Otris. The sounds of punches echoed like thunder on the battlefield. The once great dwelling of the titans was now completely destroyed. What was once a towering mountain guarding the titan's abode had become a leveled terrain with numerous craters and bodies of divine entities scattered around. In the field, only three vague figures could be seen amidst the battle. The first was Cronos, holding his scythe above his head, while a strange green and dark light gathered on his weapon. He was preparing his final move to kill this terrible being. Meanwhile, the other two figures were Atlas, the physically strongest of the titans, and Inmo, the titan slayer. Atlas was using the last of his strength to hold off Inmo so that his brother could deliver the final blow. However, his enemy proved to be unmatched in the world. Even after so many titans had died, they had never seen their enemy's blood. About to lose, Atlas heard his brother's voice saying, "Step aside." Atlas quickly disengaged from the hand-to-hand fight with his opponent, stepping to the side.
    Survival Manual in the Dawn of Time.
    Phim ảnh · Hora_Do_Mori
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  • RayPrime
    RayPrime11mth
    bình luận

    He should also build an AR simulated fighting companion, to learn how to fight and how to face various enemies in different environments

    Ch 5 Chapter 5: The First Invention
    DC: I am Bruce Wayne
    Tranh châm biếm · God_Doom
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  • RayPrime
    RayPrime11mth
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    The last 3 chapters are going nonowhere, I didn't think you're trying to project the MC as dumb after all that we've seen.

    Ch 39 Part 37 - New sheriff in town
    The Monk in the MCU
    Phim ảnh · Cedric_7512
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  • RayPrime
    RayPrime11mth
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    brothel?

    "As always, what else is there for me to do," I replied. "If I had some gold, I might have gone to a brother or something. Maybe see myself getting a nice summer islander girl. Those are always in high command."
    What is dead may never die (Theon SI)
    Diễn sinh tác phẩm · Ironwolf852
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  • RayPrime
    RayPrime11mth
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    lot of v s

    In view, a humble vaudevillian veteran, cast vicariously as both victim and villain by the vicissitudes of Fate. This visage, no mere veneer of vanity, is a vestige of the vox populi, now vacant, vanished. However, this valorous visitation of a by-gone vexation stands vivified, and has vowed to vanquish these venal and virulent vermin vanguarding vice and vouchsafing the violently vicious and voracious violation of volition.
    The Anti Hero Mage
    Tranh châm biếm · ashwiniprasad
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  • RayPrime
    RayPrime11mth
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    why not use lightsaber to create a spark

    The perk would be restored by midnight, but I still had to prepare for the next four days. It was at this point that I began to appreciate the simple things I had taken for granted in the modern world. I mean, lighting a fire used to be as easy as turning a knob or striking a match. It would take a mere five seconds, if not less. Yet by the time I created a flint from wood-on-wood friction, my palms were covered in blisters, and it was almost three hours after dark, which meant in three more, my perk would be back after all.
    A JEDI IN WESTEROS
    Ti vi · REALMSINUS
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  • RayPrime
    RayPrime11mth
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    Didn't you say he was transmigrated at 10

    One time, when I was about 8 years old, I was waiting in the hospital hallway for my mom to finish her shift so we could go home. To my surprise, I saw Benedict Cumberbatch wearing scrubs and talking to a beautiful doctor beside him.
    Marvel: Spectre's Chronicles
    Phim ảnh · Rai_jin
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