Ryujjin_jaka

Umm.... Yuuya sensei, apakah novel yang satu ini masih berjalan atau hanya rehat sementara?

THE BEST FANFIC OVERGEARED EVER, starting from writing detailed punctuation, good character deepening, and developments to look forward to of course (always curious...) in my opinion, making the Sahara the focal point of development is a brilliant idea!!!!

Oh yeah, damn plagiarism and shameless claiming to be a writer!!!!!!, I mean have you ever felt guilty copying someone else's work.....!!!? (60+ chapters more, actually)~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~{I am writing this review because I spontaneously saw that the work of someone I consider an "idol" in written fanfics has been imitated}[imagine you find a long lost piece of gold and it was returned in duplicate by someone you don't know at all], and I'm sorry if anyone doesn't like seeing my comment}

Yeayyyy!!!!!!!

Good job there!!!

+1!

God job

good job there