Emibm2468

The best piece of advice I can guide you is to write the story you want to write not the one the world wants you to

covid?

the advice I can give is to start at the beginning of the story. after all you can always use flashbacks.

to be brutally honest there isn’t much to to analyze or criticize because all that has happened is just prologue.

The story was good beforehand, but it is a big improvement. At least on the gramatical sense. The sentence structure was a bit lackluster before. Remember that a story is good because of it’s characters and the interactions between them, not because of the action scenes or cool settings. Also The writing is just a way to transmit the story to other people. The better it is, the clearer is the story is transmitted. (and viceversa)

it would take the shape of a what’re drop. the reason why water doesn’t keep that shape normally is because the water splits into many drops but if the surface tension is “magically enhanced” it would be like that.

he is probably talking about the random shadow boxing.

this is the first time I have seen that chinese illogical thinking ends up helping the protagonist.

This just doesn’t make sense at all. as far as they know Aisen could have used a strong genjutsu to get info from any root ninja that has been in the base and is now unaccounted for. which neither of them would be able to confirm without Danzo.

It’s too hard to decide but I’m between “this game” and “takt”