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Flying snake or wait to make flying tiger, with lighting powers will compensate for its lack of destructive power. Most jonins won’t event be able to do anything to it at that point.
Only him can hold himself on his own while in danger
It was it inherited great sperpent
I just had a thought maybe the final upgrade for the 10 shadows would be to fuse them with his body allowing him to use all their innate skills at will, at the cost of the shadows
Great chapter good work, but please can I make a suggestion, don’t have an arranged marriage or harem, if possible stay clear of romance cus most of the time it just shifts the focus of the story and the story never progresses, plus I don’t think it suits his character
Much better pacing this time around, still a bit of waffle when it comes to chakra explainions, it would be better to exclude how technique work eg silent step and focus on continuing the story or shorten the chapters, all round very good chapter keep up the good work 👍🫡
His chakra reserves r pitifully small it like 150 people that can’t use chakra and he uses nearly all his chakra needs big chakra reserve upgrade maybe through time skip
I kinda want him to be the kakashi of his generation, super skilled, a lot of internal suffering, but deep down he cares for the village and his friends but doesn’t show it, but everyone knows it
Lots of ppl have had this crossover idea but all of them have failed to produce anything half decent, please do this crossover justice, so far everything is great and very promising keep up the good work👍
The origin skill makes him practically omnipotent
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First of all keep it up don’t be sceptical we are all really enjoying something on here that’s actually well written , second I think u should allow mc go to be able to use his summons attributes 4 example nues lightning or elephants water or the adaption of maghdora, also I think he should be able to pick up the reversed cursed technique for healing
It’s great how human u made the mc but pls don’t drag it out to much, let him have a near death gojo moment that solves his mentality
That amount of Volts would vapourizres u instantl y