FiendFyre
Hey, just a small town guy reading and shit
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FiendFyre21dcông bốHonestly, this has a decent concept, but I feel like it’s not executed all that well. The writing style kind of eludes me as it feels like it was written on chat gpt. I’m sure it’s not but the habit of using metaphors in uncanny situations dilutes the focus on the plot. Additionally the characters seem 2D. But overall it’s not that bad, it’s just not the greatest thing in the world. But personally I stopped at chapter 42.
- FiendFyre5mthbình luậnCh 1 1: A Dreadful night
- FiendFyre7mthbình luậnCh 35 Midosagi's Connection
- FiendFyre10mthcông bố
Hey guys! This is FiendFyre here giving a classic 5-star review to this amazing story. I have uploaded 50 chapters as of now and will be working to edit them all, I will also be updating 3 chaps a day. Please do alert me to any spelling or grammatical mistakes and I will fix them right away. Love ya! Peace out
- FiendFyre1yrbình luậnCh 46 Chapter 46 - Trouble
- FiendFyre1yrbình luậnCh 45 Chapter 45 - Drunken Stupor
- FiendFyre1yrbình luậnCh 44 Chapter 44 - Gold Mine
- FiendFyre1yrbình luậnCh 43 Chapter 43 - Yuna's Fears
- FiendFyre1yrbình luậnCh 42 Chapter 42 - Talks in the Bath
- FiendFyre1yrbình luậnCh 41 Chapter 41 - Kizmel
- FiendFyre1yrbình luậnCh 40 Chapter 40 - In The Background
- FiendFyre1yrbình luậnCh 39 Chapter 39 - Elven Dance
- FiendFyre1yrbình luậnCh 38 Chapter 38 - Forest of Wavering Mists
- FiendFyre1yrbình luậnCh 27 Chapter 27 - Bullbous Bow
- FiendFyre1yrbình luậnCh 26 Chapter 26 - Extra Skill
- FiendFyre1yrbình luậnCh 25 Chapter 25 - Secrets and Whiskers
- FiendFyre1yrbình luậnCh 24 Chapter 24 - The Children of Aincrad
- FiendFyre1yrbình luậnCh 23 Chapter 23 - 2nd Floor