Shatterstream

Yes for ease of the reader mainly. (I can’t keep track when I’m reading fics with tons of moves)

Fixed! Thank you :)

Update please?:)

What I imagine Cleyera looks like

Here’s Silver:)

What I imagine Jun looks like

Very excited about this one. Original premise in a well written story. Love the use of details and how realistic it is with MC being dumped into this new world. I’m almost finished reading and I’ve loved every chapter!

This paragraph for example, was put together oddly. Do Rosa and Hilda’s levels almost match or do their levels almost match that of the Virbank gym? Wording it more like: The girls at last had Pokémon who’s levels matched. Rosa breathed a sigh of relief as she realized she no longer felt like dead weight on the team. Being the same level as Hilda brought her confidence and a feeling of strength she hadn’t before known. (Really touch on emotions for character development) In preparation for their upcoming gym battle they set their minds on a day of heavy training.

Like I said, your story brought me to this platform. So I really want to follow it and be impressed. You have the desire and the potential and you’re obviously passionate about your story. I’ll go through and find a paragraph to comment on that I can use to give you structure advice.