NyxReveuse
Instagram- "nyx_reveuse" Fantasy | Romance Author ^.^
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NyxReveuse1yrcông bốI can't rate below 5 since I enjoyed the chapters a little too much xD Writing Quality: Couldn't spot a single grammar mistake, and no problem in reading or understanding the words and paragraphs. Great job Author 😅 Story Development: It's not too fast or too slow, perfect speed. It didn't get boring either since a cliffhanger made my curiosity rise and well, the system was one of the best parts 🤣😂 Character design and World: The World hasn't been explored in detail THAT much so can't say much about it for now but the character design is quite awesome. The physical descriptions and stuff and the MC isn't one of those thirsty people since that gets boring sooner or later 😅🤣 Overall, 5/5 for everything, all the best Author~ Can't wait to read further on 🤩
- NyxReveuse1yrbình luậnCh 4 Scarlett
- NyxReveuse1yrbình luậnCh 3 Nyx
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😂😂😂
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Poor system...🤣🤣
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Oooh xD 😂🤣
The mysterious voice in his head belonged to Nyx, the name he had given to the "Sacred Dragon Emperor System." - NyxReveuse1yrbình luậnCh 2 Incident
- NyxReveuse1yrbình luận[It's pronounced 'catheter'.] The voice corrected him.
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..... xD
Ethan had noticed her subtle actions—the way she bit her lip and an ambiguous glint in her eyes as she looked at him. Ethan couldn't blame her, as even he was pleasantly surprised to see that his member was even larger than it had been in his previous life. - NyxReveuse1yrbình luận
What...?
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Hmm the system is pretty cool xD
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Oof yeah bad past...
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😂😂😂
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The system's quite helpful 🤣
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Relatable reaction xD
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Well now you experienced what dying felt like...
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Cool one 😄
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Revenge
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That's some deep stuff ngl 😅🤔
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Me everyday when I'm going to sleep xD
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