Old_Beard

It's clean and nice chapter!

Change the tittle? Seems the chapter story still the same, waiting for the new update. Keep up the good work bro, keep going and good luck. There still time to explore.

Lovely, brother always there for his own brother

Hahahaha.. someone does need some smack to get on his senses

Get better, keep going

Keep going!

I laugh out loud on there... Thanks for the laugh, the story kind of cute so far, hope next one got more of action. Keep the good work bro and kill some pig

The story good enough for now, though the sfx words sometimes cringe me out. And the cripple thingy in the tittle, I don't really get I yet. Overall worth try