Vayuputhran_13

Hey author, First of all, great job with this story. I very much like it. Compared to most of the trash that passes this site your novel is a breath of fresh air. Secondly, don't rush. you need not write 7 chapters a week. Just give us 1 quality chapter most of us will be happy. Don't lose the story for speed. I am saying this because a few chapters felt a little forced or more like a filler, just so you know . Continue doing the good work .. And for anyone looking, this story is among the top HP Fanfics in the site

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thanks for the chapter and continue the work... it's really an enjoyable one

I did a re-edit. try giving more feedback. and thanks

Thanks for the thought. I wanted some things to be clear upfront so I can describe what happens easier. Please continue to support

Oh, thanks I will try to think of something to change this way of presentation. I wanted to get a picture of what I intend to paint properly. Maybe it went a little wordy. Thanks again

I am the author of this story so I will be shamelessly giving this story a full 5 stars. You guys please read it and give me reviews. All positive reviews are appreciated and negative reviews will be considered to improve the story and my way of writing. I will try my best to give a great story