I was recommended this book by someone I know and then I saw it in ongoing originals today so I knew I had to read it, I'll be honest about my input and the things that I find appealing or otherwise The plot is quite fluid and the characters are well placed, this is the kind of story one can close eyes on and imagine it's world moving in head. In down point there isn't much but sometimes some description can be overwhelming. I enjoy the story so far

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Honestly was pulled in by that dope cover but the story is better than cover itself the protagonist have very unique personality and charms unique to him I'll be reading!! Thanks author

Although the idea of system and everyone getting them suddenly isn't something totally new as seen with a book I don't remember name of but everyone get system as gift on Christmas. But the thing about this book is writer had taken quite a unique take on it with territories and coins, the story have a nice flow and Bing readable waiting for more chapter to came so I can Bing read in a go

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In synopsis mother who live in china* Not which live in china

This story have potential, it is interesting and prose The things are well placed characters personalities are defining. You are doing nice work~~ Keep up the good work author, I'll be reading

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Waiting for next chapter Here have a 5 star review and give me another chapter because premises seems interesting and the characters seems to know what they are doing All the best

nicely written

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I love how fluid the story is

The story is well written the author seems to know where he/she is taking it, characters are likable, Concerned for his battle prowess, I enjoyed various things but at the same time wish for a bit of crisis or something a bit more exciting than normal, Hope for more chapters as I want more of this 🌸🧁

A story that we all know by now but with slight difference of writing and the unique style of author brings out best of it, I enjoy the interaction of fl and ml and wanna see the mess around more, Also if any reader is reading this review dude just review author's novel if you are enjoying it~ author will be happy ik

It is something one could read while having nothing to do and no other thing to read doesn't mean it is bad just lacking in sense of crisis and excitement hope those will be added too, On the postive side the author is regular the story is fun the character are 3D it is realistic

Title says it the story is very simple yet fun one could read it for hours without getting bored leaving few a bif awkward scene aside the story is very well written, And it infuriates me to see that people won't reviews such a well written work enough to get rantings!! Writer is human too~ And the writer of this novel is a amazing human for writing this book in this enjoyable manner~~ I'll look forward to more

The story have a fairytale classic vibes a new aura feels immersive hope to read more from it it is very well written, Some places sentences could feel a bit off leaving that aside character, background and other things are well defined~ Thanks keep writing author 🧁

I find it weird When books are this finely written and yet doesn't have enough review for rating like reader doesn't even consider that writer is a person and need praise, You are writing awesome I love the story so far, I enjoy it alot so keep writing~

Finally something different from other eastern novels with only Chinese myths and legends I've always been interested in Hinduism and the way it is portrayed in this book is awesome Hope to read more author