aikn

Very well written with an interesting story and good plot, the way MC thinks and deals with things is satisfying, don't expect much closure to the girls as it's a harem, the spin on immortals and the unique developing plot is the selling point here. Entertaining and worth the read

although the story is interesting , the writing quality and english just put me off too much , the MC carries the story nicely but it doesn't offset the disappointment caused by the plot and the writing quality.Try reading a bit ,it's not worth the time for me.

The writing quality is good , the story is interesting and glued together , nothing bothers me too much , the girls are well written with personality although somewhat cliche , decent amount of snu snu , worth the time spent reading.

This one honestly deserves a lot more attention , the interactions between the mc and the main girl are entertaining , it's a breath of fresh air from system novels , the plot is well thought out , some might complain about the girl but she's not a tsun tsun and overall quite useful to the mc. The writing quality is good , nothing bothers me till now and the story is interesting and entertaining , overall worth the read

This one might be generic for a lot of people ( mc grows weak to strong , gets wife , helps friends , power scales up with the plot , plot problems etc. )but it's everything that it's supposed to be for a decent read , there's nothing bad about it. The story elements might seem convoluted and one dimensional to some but it doesn't bother me in any way. The romance is good with things leading up to it with reason , the friend squad is good too. In conclusion , an entertaining read with nothing bad about it.

Thr writing quality is excellent , the way the author stitches together the plot and defined scenes is extremely satisfying, dark story lots of snu snu, the MC will be a hit or miss for a lot of people as he's quite edgy , for me it's worth the read.The novel kept me entertained throughout , I'm waiting eagerly for more chapters.

im at 350

he is somewhat concerned for the his and his disciples' future but he does not have a goal except teaching them dealing with plot problems and having fun along the way. The plot somewhat just happens along without much premonition to it.

ty

fair enough