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I only remember jumping off of yachts into a swamp and jumping off cliffs.

Basement dwelling virgin author. .-.-.-.-.-

This reads like a my three beautiful wives are beautiful vampires clone from the beginning. Honestly this is me reading poison and injeesting poison. Your grammar is okay. Your world building sound exactly like MTBWV. The only unique thing I could pick out is the weird parasite in the MC’s soul. The writing order and dialogue is a complete mess. Why on earth would you talk to a parasite in your soul in the middle of a battle. It’s either the battle or the talking not both. I am sure you average trash WebNovel reader would like this, but I would never read this seriously. Oh and the MC acts like an adhd, edgy, horny teenager. Also if you are going to try and copy a novel off of another novel then at least copy a novel that is better than MTBWV. Why make a shitty wish fulfillment, when you can make a really interesting story. Examples: The Legendary Mechanic | Reverend Insanity | Lord of the Mysteries | Journey of the Fate Destroying Emperor | The First Order

This is a Yandere slice of life with hardly any plot that you need to pick apart from all of the chapters that glorify Victor. Only read this for delusional self fulfillment! The author could have made this something more than just 600-700 chapters of mostly filler and then the mc suddenly gains like what 25, 30 wives in two chapters. No real character development no, the flimsy reason the author gave was oh victor in hell for 500 year and did not see his wives; now victor goes and f*cks all of his 7 wives realatives and women in 500 sq ft. You know what happens next… guess.. all of the women fucked by the mc now automatically become his wives and they just accept it with no reason other than; oh mc handsome must fuck like some brainless whore dog. The author is the biggest disappointment to this novel give any other established author who does not write harem this novel and they will do a 💯% better job. Better than the monkey brain shit the author puts out. Wait I should apologize to the monkeys.🙊

Story needs more development and world background is feels incomplete at the time of review.

Breaking the fourth wall makes total sense!

What the fuck

The fact that your name is Ero something already made your argument irrelevant.

And have you ever thought about he probably just wants to survive in his new world using most of his past life knowledge. I mean what else is he going to do with the knowledge sit on his ass? Also he has his sister to pamper. The only reason why you made this review is cause the author does not specifically tell you his driving goals that or you are right and the author fails to give the mc a goal.

The authors grammar is also garbage.